Goldenbird #1
Posted by Ainur on 15 Oct 2006
Chapter 1. 22 pages.
Note that the fonts (and in some cases, even the text!) differs from the print edition.
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I came from Comicspace.com
Neat comic, overall with pleasent layout that works.
There’s quite a different flavor to the graphic compare to many other ones I have seen. I would love to see the line work vary a bit more, and have them arranged in a slightly tighter form, without loosing it’s fluidity. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the comment! I’m really happy to get constructive criticism from other artists. Your work looks wonderful. I love manga and your stories made me nostalgic. I’ll be keeping an eye on your site.